Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Talofa lava Madie, Ms Peters here. I enjoyed reading your Tooth Fairy story. I liked how you used a sizzling start, dialogue and a character twist. Maybe next time you could proofread for spelling and punctuation and include a WALT, Blurb and Reflection. Keep up the good effort Madie, blog ya later!
Talofa lava Madie, Ms Peters here. I enjoyed reading your Tooth Fairy story. I liked how you used a sizzling start, dialogue and a character twist. Maybe next time you could proofread for spelling and punctuation and include a WALT, Blurb and Reflection. Keep up the good effort Madie, blog ya later!
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