Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Madison I really like your writing about your recount. It is so cool! You could try to work on putting some pictures in and making your writing bigger. Keep up your good work. By Kahurangi.
Hey Madie! I really liked reading your recount, I also noticed the describing words they were really cool. Maybe next time make the photo bigger so it's easier to read. Bye see you later.
Kia ora Madison I really like your writing about your recount. It is so cool! You could try to work on putting some pictures in and making your writing bigger. Keep up your good work. By Kahurangi.
ReplyDeleteHey Madie! I really liked reading your recount, I also noticed the describing words they were really cool. Maybe next time make the photo bigger so it's easier to read. Bye see you later.
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